Monday, 21 August 2017

I am learning to write a recount


The 100 Days of School Party

Yesterday Room 7 had their 100 days party of great learning.

First we set our 100 treasures in 10 rows and we counted our treasures in ones and it took a really long time so we counted in tens.

Next we decorated and iced 100 cupcakes. The icing was really runny and I wanted to have a little taste so I did. They tasted kind of soft and creamy.

Finally we did 100 exercises and I found the jumping sack tricky because I kept falling over in the jumping sack!

I will never forget the 100 days party because I ate 100 cupcakes and I did 100 exercises. It helped me get fit for playing my rugby!


By Thenu


2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well done Thenu. You have written a well structured recount using your plan and goals chart. You are confident at using joining words and sequence words in your sentences. Keep working at adding detail to your writing and describing words to make your writing interesting for the reader.

Anonymous said...

I am learning to write a recount
it can be tricky to get all the details in